Immortal Lost
© Copyright 1992 by
Jayden Kneller
And yea I look around.
I see nothing, my eyes are closed.
I look within, I see that I am not alone.
I open my senses to the surroundings, and yet, I get no responses.
Mine eyes are open, I can't see, tis too dark.
My hands flail in front of me, they pass through the air, nothing around.
I am in a room, I can see now, I am wearing white, it reflects.
The darkness still surrounds me, I can see walls.
I am in a small room, dark, black.
I turn my head, I don't know if I see a door anywhere, it is black.
I look up, I see black light radiating from a bulb high above.
What a morbid environment.
I try to move my foot, I can't, why?
My shoe is black, black as usual, NIKE.
I hear a noise from behind me, I turn to see, I see nothing.
Someone touched my back, who's there?
I look, yet see no one.
Oh, my eyes are closed again.
I, I can't see, maybe I have gone blind, my shirt doesn't radiate any more.
I am stuck, everything is pushing in on me.
I think I am going to faint, the pressure is too great.
I think my foot hurts, I can't tell, I can't do anything.
Uh!
Something probes my mind, what?
I slightly open my eyes, I am dizzy, my mind is shot, I can't understand what I see.
A big black square in front of me, on the other side of a long hallway, I think it is a hallway, I don't understand, I am confused.
My arms, where are they, why are they there?
I want to move them, I can't, they are stuck there.
Please someone come and help me, I am so confused, what am I, what has been done to me?
I fight, my mind has been obliterated, I can't think, who am I?
The insanity surrounds me, so strong, and I so weak.
The black thing is now moving, towards me.
Light seems to flow from its depths.
A light beam centers on my eyes, I can't see the black no more, too strong.
Ah!
That hurts!
My left leg is, is, is gone.
I, I, uh!
I don't really remember anything anymore, my life passed on, my arms ripped from my body, and shredded.
I do remember my heart, pounding away on the floor, my head looking at it, from a distance.
The last sight, horrid, I know I died.
Where am I now though, how can I remember this stuff, I died.
I look around, ah!
What a sight, I turn away, and try to run, I float instead.
I pass a finger on the floor, twitching insanely, willed by an unknown entity.
I hear a voice behind me, it scares me, I gain speed.
I see something strange in front of me, I change course, up and south, i might not be right, I get my directions confused easily.
I escape from the building, to my horror.
I see spirits stirring across the city, it looks like a city.
I look below me, the surface of the earth looks transparent, and a reddish glow appears from underneath.
I fly across the sky, slowly, fearing for my life, I died though.
I wish I had some guidance, I don't know what I am doing.
Rush, a figure from below the earths surface appeared, flying towards me at top notched speed.
I hurry to get away, he grabs onto where my right leg once was, holding me.
I try to fight, he has a good hold.
Other spirits come around me and mock me, condemning my existence.
Pressure pushing down on me, all around, why me?
I cry out, will anyone hear me.
I look up, and see a small light.
I long for the light.
I'm stuck where I am, for now.
Taunting, torture.